Tuesday 15 May 2018

Descriptive writing

hi this week i did some descriptive writing it was fun thinking of words to say

descriptive writing
You can see the lights on the Ferris wheel that looks like the starry night sky or a hypnotic state of allusion ? . You can feel the ground moving beneath your feet like it’s an alive monster trying to eat you raw . The sky is a gradient painting that illuminates the fairgrounds fading out Into the night sky each second. You can hear the people screaming in joy trying to get to the next ride before everyone else. You can see a ginormous line awaiting for the next day

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